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This is an animation of the Book of Joel chapter 2 from the Bible.
I am new to animation with roughly 3 months of experience.
It is my second scripted animation. I made it with blender 2.76
I gladly welcome any feedback or constructive criticism :)
Joel Chapter 2
That's very impressive work for such a short amount of time. Your timing and flow are really good and your interpretation of the events works very well.
The only thing that I would say you got a bit wrong was the amount of reverberation you added for the voice of God. It made it quite difficult to understand what was being said.
Overall, very good work.
Thank you, i am very grateful for what you have said.
Thank you for the motivating words. I will definitely tone down the reverberation in future animations or look for a different effect all together.
I like the polygon characters, they have a charm, remind me of psx games.
It is well made for someone who has little experience. Your work could improve its "visuals" adding some backgrounds, even fixed images will do the trick if they are good enough. Some extra emotion on the narrating voice will go nicely with that epic music.
You are in a good way to do great animations soon.
Thank you very much for the encouraging words.
I will definitely use your advice in my next animations especially regarding the background and emotion during narrating as i had not considered that.
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