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This is basically the whole movie in 2 and a half minutes, so DO NOT watch this unless you've seen "Deadpool"
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Animation was great but I can't deal with music out of beat.
I loved this movie and I was 12 when I saw it
Can I be painfully honest? Even though I can see where you were trying to go with the choice of music to parody and whatnot, I felt that even if it had been synced correctly and timed better that it probably still wouldn't have worked. Why not parody a song used in the movie, or use an orchestrated score to make some quirky jokes alongside that? After a while, this song will be grossly outdated and run out of the times, if I must state harshly.
I do, however, have to admire your art style, as I can tell that you've really been working on it pretty diligently so far in the time frame that I last watched your content. In fact, I never even thought that I would make a review like this for your work until just now, but sometimes some honest (and rather harsh) criticism can really lift someone's determination and take them to higher places in their craft over a span of time and many failed attempts along the way. Granted, my content might not be much of a prize in a comparative standpoint to your's, but that hardly matters in the sense of giving an overall acute observation.
I just feel that this could've explored so much more than it actually did, and had it taken perhaps longer to make or possessed some more outerlying creative focus, this could've really been a gut wrenching and maybe thought provoking parody of the satirical antihero comedic Deadpool that we all know and love for those very reasons.
I have to give this a 3 (and I do mean I HAVE to), because I feel your potential could better rival this work over-exceedingly and that maybe this was one of those "hit and miss" situations for you. I really hope that you can understand my point of view in this case, and that this review doesn't come off as a personal attack in any sense. Thanks for reading it, if you did, and I do look forward to more cartoons nevertheless.
This is a really cool idea but needs better execution.
The visual style is cute and appealing. Consistency is top notch. There are plenty of snippets that show your proficiency as an animator but for the most part all the shots were lack luster. I think my favorite bit was the Deadpool and Colossus duet. Deadpool's hand being crushed was really nicely animated. The pacing went a long with the music well but all the animation felt like it was being held up by the songs speed. The chorus text cutaways are probably the thing I dislike most, very straight forward with nothing appealing to keep your interest at bay. Music could use work.
There's a lot of talent here for sure and you should be proud of all the work you guys put into this. Look forward to seeing more from you. Congrats on the front page!
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