The colors are really nice, but It stops so abruptly and seems unfinished. If you add a few more scenes I think this could be something nice!

You want some advice, try not to post these sorts of things as actual submissions to the Portal.

Instead, set it up as an unpublished project, then go to the animation forum and ask people to 'beta test' it for you. It's a much more effective way to get feedback, and you won't be saddled with a low score or a blam.

It isn't a good idea to submit tests under judgement. Tests, walk cycles, etc usually gets a really low score if not blamed. If you want to put tests on here, there is something called the "Dumping Grounds". It's the button next to your message button where anyone can post tests at. And with it, you can show off anything to your friends, family, and random users on here. So please do that instead.

I thought it was a good attempt at animated walk cycle.
You might want to visit drawing with jazza he has some good tips on construction lines that will help keep your character a little more fem. He also has some good animation tutorials that will help her have a a smoother loop.
Over all good effort!

you gotta put more curves in the female anatomy. Go ask a female from class to pose some walking and start practicing.