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Review of Salivation fanfic
I do like what you've go but perhaps try to create a suitable, less awkward ratio for the stage (eg. 1024x576).
Also, try to slow down the timing on your more lengthy text bubbles so the viewers can get a chance to read AND process it's contents, before moving on.
They get better as they go on.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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