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Jake buys a new telescope that can see all sorts of cool things, like a blackhole, the vast unknown, and uranus!
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The voices and audio seemed rather quiet. The artstyle was ok, but the animation I feel can be improved. Consider adding more movements and gestures to your characters so they do not appear to move like stick figures.
One example was the part where the guy in glasses says "You can't see the moon [...]", at this point, you could have him make a gesture such as rolling his eyes, or having his head tilt and move slightly as he speaks so he appears more active and lively.
I thought it was funny but It's kind of a one gag video...
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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