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This is my first game. All support appreciated. This is a basic 2d platformer. The controls are explained in game.
This game was not what i thought it would be. This game made no sort of sense to me at all.i would love it if you would make more story, 2d pixel games can be really good, as long as they have a rather good story, and at least explain whats happening better.
Ok. Thank you for playing. Maybe you'll like the sequel better.
First off, The engine you used for this is the Stencyl engine which in the past other game makers essentially copied, modified the levels a little bit and called it their own. You at least modified the sprites and gave it a basic storyline.
Secondly, A complete lack of sound made the game dull. Even jump sound effects would have been nice.
Lastly, the difficulty and plot. There wasn't any. The character's hit box is so big that it's really difficult to fall down holes, there's no enemies and I didn't care about the plot.
Seeing as how it's your first game, I'd suggest learning more about actual game design, plot and even working on character design.
The plot is a mixed bag for me. Looking back on this game I'm proud of what I accomplished but it's very artsy and hard to follow. It also feeds into a much bigger narrative of fanfics and webtoons that I'm not gonna get into.
Thanks for the feedback.
HEY~ this is running pretty smoothly tbh
im no game maker but i would play it if it had some nice background more sounds and a good story line
plus try making some enemies that would be nice c:
Good to hear. I'll try more with future games.
Decent game could use a bit more mechanics than running, jumping and double jumping. The game play kind of reminds me of Super Mario Bros. This game is a bit challenging but that's alright. Fix some grammar typos, also about the 20 second escape thing. Add a timer to that, so it's actually takes 20 seconds. Navigating is a bit confusing and needs a bit work a map could be useful. Decent for a demo but for a full game kind of disappointing.
Thank you for the support. I'll do my best to improve.
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