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A short animation I made.
Voices generously provided by TIBG and Fizorak.
My YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/user/TheIYouMe
I was well animated and put together. It just seems like the video is sort of slower than intended. Even played at like 110% it would probably have a lot more fluidity.
I consciously wanted the video to be a bit slow, to sort of let the jokes sink in and not move on to quickly. I can see that it might feel a tad too slow though. It might've helped if there had been some background music or something to make it seem like there was more there.
But thanks for the kind words regarding the animation :)
lol bad puns are kind of actually funny) and yours was funny ) I expected something dangerous n shit lol
Haha thank you :D I like bad puns too and quite enjoy doing these little video with bad puns and/or something unexpected :)
I'm not gonna lie this seemed kinda dry, but the animation is pretty good. I think the voices should maybe me more enthusiastic. Hope this helps!
Any constructive feedback is always helpful :)
I'm glad you liked the animation, and yeah, the Sound is usually the weakest part for me since that's really something that I don't have a lot of knowledge or experience in :)
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