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And so it begins . . .

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rated 2.26 / 5 stars
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Experimental
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pilot
black-star
ask-blog
tfs-dbza

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Uploaded
Dec 1, 2015 | 10:41 PM EST

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Author Comments

This is a short pilot intro for a new tumblr/youtube ask blog. If there are enough people interested in it I'll make it a full on series. Please rate and leave comments below on whether or not I should continue or if there's something you'd like to see in this and other future projects.

*If this gets made, I'll use original lines and dialogue.

=audio TFS DBZA Abridged=

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bluebandblueband

Rated 2 / 5 stars

I enjoy the story you told I think it was a humorous setup to a movie. I think the voice acting was good and characteristic, it could of been a bit louder though. I would suggest working on the graphics a bit more. Try looking at some pictures of stuff that's similar to what your trying to draw, focus a lot on shapes, sizes and colors. I think those changes to your movies could help the score a lot. It seems like you have the desire and potential, so keep at it and you'll improve greatly. Keep up the good work!


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