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I made this animation on Halloween but unfortunately i finished it Nov 7th well here you go please give out CONSTRUCTIVE criticism thank you
Bing bing bong. Lol. Decent animation, funny ending, and an excellent choice in music. This was actually pretty decent. Only complaints are the sound effects, and the length. 3 stars!
I appreciate that this has a story the audience can follow. Something I would suggest would to add some ambiance music to fill up the empty space. I really think it would help an animation like this a long way.
Keep it up!
The animation detail was good, and so was the humor. I liked this, but I would suggest maybe adding some background noise/music so that the sound-bit you use doesn't sound chopped or just tossed in. The parts where I had this thought were right before he answered the door and gulped, then again with the scream when seeing the trump mask. Overall though great work! 4vote 4stars. Will be looking for future projects.
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