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Double Homicide

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Oct 20, 2002 | 3:58 AM EDT

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This was very rushed just as a funny little stupid senseless violence stick movie.

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XwaynecoltXXwaynecoltX

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

gmm notbad could be better though

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well the film starts off right away with some stick getting killed, more like smashed up hehe, so im thinking you should ad a stop action code with some added play and replay buttons, also i noticed you had little to no backrounds at all, for me backrounds are very important some people tend to not worry about them yet they do spice of the scene alot, even if it was just a solid color backround it would sufice, just something to think about while making your next flash, now another thing i noticed and something you could work on would be the flash itself was very short and more like a clip, maybe you should add a lot of short clips into one flash that way its not over in a second, anyways its a cute clip of a flash but needs more and needs a few fixes, so nice job but put abit more effort next time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
fix the looping, with a simple stop action code, theres lots of tutorials on here newgrounds just do a search for them, with the phrase "STOP-ACTION-CODE" in the field, also you may need to add some backrounds even if a solid color, and last but not least it was too short so make it longer or add other shorts along with it, so it has some depth to it.

~~OVERALL~~
Overall its a cute clip of a flash but needs more along with a few fixes

~X~


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TyronepTyronep

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

This was effortless

It seemed no effort was put in this it looped for no reason no point to it and the only thing good was the blood effects, dont give up though at least your tried unlike other submissions that are utterly useless and stupid, again just keep trying!!



chibilunargirlchibilunargirl

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

Hmm...

Not good. Sorry. Work on your artistic skills.



OnceTwiceThriceOnceTwiceThrice

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

hmmm...

just add sound and a loading screen and it would be better.


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AleasNeoAleasNeo

Rated 5 / 5 stars

not bad

all you need to do is add a shit load more and some sound..other than that..it would be pretty cool..o ya..get a loading screen to..