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The ATM

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rated 2.90 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Drama
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cartoon
animation
gigglyboy

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Uploaded
Oct 17, 2015 | 9:39 PM EDT

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Money from the ATM machine.

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thepixelizerthepixelizer

Rated 2 / 5 stars

I've noticed that in a lot of your cartoons you don't have much of a story and they are paced excruciatingly too slow. Also the main character is just hard to look at and is not very interesting.

I suggest you make a storyboard before you start animating. The most important part to any story is giving the main character a goal, and to add problems and stop him/her from reaching it.
Also if you want to keep the same main character I suggest you make another character with more personality.

Also most of his adventures are just feature him doing boring everyday task like eating, being on the computer, talking on a phone. Make your cartoon more exciting or dramatic or funny.
Come on now it's a cartoon! Unleash your imagination, anything can happen in a cartoon.