i hated it it made me too sad besides this already happened in a way to lucy

You know, I agree with Lazlollie10 on this one. I love fairy tail, but this is kind of just a copy of the original story. I think that the work you put in for the video itself was outstanding, but I think that if only you had thought outside the box, your video would be amazing. (If you were to make another one) I'd definitely approve if you made another nalu video. :) Best of luck!

bad ending... and really i nearly shed a tear over this its has a really bad ending i suspected more i was suspecting more but nope

i hate to break this, but you've stolen this story from mashima-san. This is almost the exact same story with lucy and her dad, when she finally returned from tenrou island after 7 years only to find out that she was just 1 lousy month too late to see her dad. Timetravelling sucks when you cant go backwards, grief and sorrow will be poured upon you.

I wouldn't even call that a game that was just reading and it was boring I'm a fan of fairy tale and all but that wasn't any fun to do