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DergonBell

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rated 3.06 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Comedy - Parody
Tags:
dragonballz
commission
piccolo
krillin

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Uploaded
Sep 20, 2015 | 4:31 PM EDT

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Update: Fixed a stupid Typo, because I'm an idiot and learned Grammar wrong obviously.

Krillin and Piccolo is being a little mean to the new guy...

DISCLAIMER - This cartoon was commissioned by RedTritonGaming.
Check them out here - https://www.youtube.com/user/REDTRITONGAMMING/featured

Also thanks to Jordan from TrueFriendsGaming for doing the sound design stuff on this one, please check them out as well
https://www.youtube.com/user/TrueFriendsGaming

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I was actually debating on not uploading this here... I spent a good 6 months on this commission, and I didn't really care how it came out. at all... But sadly Only on youtube, I get new feedback, ever in-terms of what I'm doing right, and what I need to improve on. I even took the time to make a Newgrounds version just for it. So even through I'm not happy with the work, and I know I can do WAY better, I'm uploading it here. If it makes it, that's cool, if not, well I might lose a bit of sleep over it, but I'll get over it. I hope you guys enjoy whats there, and also I would love some Feedback. Thanks!

P.S. Yes I did get permission to upload this here.

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RedBerylFTWRedBerylFTW

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Meh. Your art style is bland and boring, your color is dismal and really off putting, your overall animation quality was lacking extremely and your lip syncing was terrible. Fortunately, the voices were great, the concept was fantastic and if everything else were that quality then this would be a really exceptional short.


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Silverelick responds:

Yeah, to be honest, this was a commission, and I didn't really have it in me to make it look good... I was utterly spiteful of the final product. This is not one of my better ones... I need to learn how to force quality, but it's kind of hard when you don't really care about the product you are making.