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Sonic transforming to Dark Sonic and is getting ready to kick Sonic.exe's ass.
an interesting fight of sonic VS sonic.exe...
not bad, BUT there are a few things that you should improve...:
1. use a play/replay button, or a preloader. if it loops, it usually looks like a spammy flash, and people dont receive those well...
2. the movie started out great, with sonic fighting the sonic.exe enemy, and transforming into dark(?) sonic, but then, as the battle reached a climax, and we were about to see WHAT WOULD happen, then, SUDDENLY you stopped the animation, and the movie looped back from the beginning.
if you stopped the movie just before tha final fight in order to create suspense, then it was a clever move, because the next episode will be the conclusion of your series, and it will be rather cool to watch.
BUT: you should have added some text saying ''to be continued'' or ''to be concluded, in the NEXT episode'', and then to add some info and credits about your work.
else, its just a loop movie, with no story or a solid plot. and without an ending, for that matter.
3. the movie should have an ending. if you didnt stopped the movie early on, right before the ending for a cliffhanger plot, then you SHOULD add an ending/some conclusion in this fight.
what will happen with sonic?
will he revive his friends?
4. the part where sonic transformed into the ''dark sonic'' was a bit too long.
i know that you were aiming to create action/a climax in the battle scene, but making it a few seconds shorter, (or faster), would make it more enjoyable.
in case this animation was difficult for you to complete (and i am sure it was, so congrats for yoru hard work), then disregard suggestion 4.
but please, DO follow suggestions 1, 2, and 3.
i just want to help you sir.
you do good spite movies, even if you didnt draw the sprites on your own, and you certainly have made great effort 2 complete this.
which is why i want to help you.
good work, keep it up, and plz follow my suggestions.
These are really great suggestions and I'll follow them for the rest of the project. But there's one small problem, I'm still a novice on Flash, so I don't know how to add in a play/replay button or a preloader..
The animation was Decent enough, the audio was meh. All in all i'd give it a 3/5.
weird and awesome at the same time keep up the good work
Thanks! I might get used to this site! ^^
An infernal battle between gold and acid.
Are you feeling it now, Mr. Krabs?
Too much coffee for Pencilmate...!
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