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The singular of dice is die.
And that is why this episode is genius. :D
Interesting story and cool stop motion, but the voice acting and dialogue need some work. Try not to repeat yourself too much - "The dice is cursed." 'What?' "The dice is cursed." 'Are you telling me the dice is cursed?' - and try to add more emotion into the voice acting. Remember, we can't see your face - especially not in this case! - so your voice has to make up for what your facial features would normally convey. I really liked the animation, it was really smooth stop motion, and the story was interesting enough to keep me watching. Overall, a mixed review, but with some work it could be great!
Thanks! Dialogue and that stuff are a challenge to me, but overall thanks!
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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