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Once again i had a great idea for an alternate version of the already modified version of this animation, it all happen when i was inserting audio and i started to experiment.. magic happen.
would have been 5 if it wasnt a fiction teemo never dies.
Nice little short and specially with that pay out.
Everything was good, I would change maybe two sound effects you used but that's just me, maybe it ends up being personal taste.
This was pretty good seeing teemo get murdered heavily nice job with the animation I liked the noir effect
Woahh, "i don't fucking care if you don't" referring to author's comments
You gotta respect people's onions man, especially when your animation undergoes this review process which relies on people's onions. I'm sure you know this, don't go around asking for an unfair score.
Even if you really don't care, does it NEED to be said? You are trying to submit this to the portal, to a much larger audience. Regardless I liked this animation. Had a couple flaws but not bad.
This started out interesting... but feel quickly. I admire the noire filter, but doesn't work well with the 3D models. This also would have been better without the voices. Let the animation portray the plot. Use text if need be. I do like the concept, but the movie as a whole felt rushed. I would say keep the setting and theme, but axe the dialogue, and add more action.
Hmmm i guess i would've clarified in the title it was a short.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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