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Crappy thing I did because I liked the voice acting.
(It is supossed to be an otter and the whole animation took like... two hours to be made, not that I am proud of that haha)
Also, I left the audio repeat later if you just want to hear it. OR you can go and listen it from the author and give it him the best score you can!
I'm only reviewing this for the voice acting. The animation was admitted to be a quick delivery vehicle, for the voicing.
I liked it, but I thought that it could have felt like more, in that it seemed to lack a true feeling of a deranged otter villain.
It came off with the feel of someone reading lines, as opposed to a character speaking. Again, this may be due to the lack of a real animated segment, or that monologues put a lot of focus on the character itself, but it could be better. (I'm really trying to avoid the cliche, "More Feeling," but that sums it up.)
With minimal effort, you could get more in this otter's head, find an emotional anchor to play off (snapping in response to failure? Failed villain?), really feel this insane otter's pain/frustration, and work on a more natural laugh. (For the character. It came off a bit forced, for a criminally insane, possibly murderous, adorable otter.)
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