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This is based on a true story, I have acouple other things im working on but i thought this would just be fun to tell you guys about. The moral of the story is, Just unpack the first day you get back
Think people are missing the "self awareness" present here because you sound young. You've got a solid grasp on the timing. Keep at it, and you'll become a god before your old enough to vote; something many of us will be envious of.
I take it you're pretty young.
Honestly, it's pretty bad. There wasn't really a punchline to this "relatable story." It was bland and the art wasn't great. Granted, assuming you are young, there is a lot of potential and you will get better. You seem to have an idea on how to do Swoozie's draw-vlog style, and knowing is half the battle. I'd just spend a little more time on the art and try to think of something you find funnier than perhaps just relatable.
YOU CAN GET BETTER, I BELIEVE IN YOU.
thanks, basically if i spent more time on this it would be better. I have a project im working on that i've been doing on and off for like 3 weeks now. Anyway thanks for the review.
True so true also it needs movement you also need a better mic
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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