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Simply a man and his refrigerator.
i think it was very good ,but maybe it was a bit too short ,and if you did it with more than just one camera position the punch line would have been funnier. keep up the good work ,
This animation is simple yet realistic;who doesn't mistreat their home appliances out of anger or impatience?That being said,maybe in the future,it can happen to anyone who wants to be a 'glutton' for punishment.Good work and keep it up!
The camera remained in a stationary placement during the cartoon's entire run.
The shadows and lighting can use a bit of improvement.
The computer is one source of light.
The bright colors indicate tbat the lights are on.
A light bulb would indicate an additional source of light.
Your environment seems to have two sources of light.
You can either put extra work into the lighting or simply turn the lights off.
A darkened room with a computer screen glow would look cool.
using both light sources would also look cool too.
Shadows also have shadows within shadows.
pay close attention to how light reacts to different things.
Lighting can easily enhance simple drawings by a lot.
I love the ceiling fan animation.
You should recycle that effect for other movies as a possible time saving trick.
The overall short was an entertaining watch.
I hope this review helps with future improvements.
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