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cute and stylish little cartoon.
I like the character design use for the animal with your cartoon.
It is a very cute animal; However, your dog looks more like a baby lamb to me.
I wasn't expecting the sheep like creature to bark like a dog.
The sheep like dog had a very expressive face.
I like the animals poses better when he was on all fours.
The sound effects were great.
The drawings could be improved by a little bit.
Carefully observe actual humans and animals for pose ideas.
Learn to understand how the joints all fit together in the body.
Once you understand how to draw your forms better after a bit more experience.
Try to also retain the interesting poses in your animations.
Play around with your lights and shadows to create a more polished looking cartoon.
I love your usage of multiple camera angles.
The characters had very expressive faces.
This was a very interesting short cartoon that you created.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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