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The teacher is furious at time for being tardy to class.
the audio is a nice choice, clear and charming
the backgrounds are nice on the eyes and good choice of warm colours, characters look nice on them
The "what you need to work on":
storywise, its a short, there isn't going to be much story.
however i had no idea that the character was late to class, perhaps it would have helped if the teacher was pointing at a clock to help enforce that.
There was weird frames where the colour of some characters go lighter or darker ? which makes it seem abrasive and look like mistakes.
Some line work wasn't cleaned up 0:08 so just take your time to clean those lines (as all the other characters don't have that issue)
But yeah, draw more inbetweens and keep at it!
Thank you so much for the tips! I'm going to keep them in mind for my next one. I 'm going to try to improve on the visual cues to make the story more understandable.
omg I love these cute little alien things.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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