I love that for such a simple story, you could have easily done it with modern technology, yet you have gone to the effort to make this fit in its own world with advanced tech yet still familiar to home.
Willow is daughter to ash, the lumberjack. Strong, wise and a veteran of the trade, how could she not look up to him? All she wants is a chance to prove herself, perhaps today she get's that chance.
I love that for such a simple story, you could have easily done it with modern technology, yet you have gone to the effort to make this fit in its own world with advanced tech yet still familiar to home.
Awesome
And another fine piece you really do know how to pull off a good story here so writing must be your thing and I liked the story the characters are deep and you made this simple yet not so simple but still made a good story here and I was pretty impressed with it all graphics are notbad either I like what you have done here and honestly this does not need any changes. So with that I'll end this review here and hope for more from you
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More story like this would be a plus
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Thanks XwaynecoltX! I appreciate the kind words. I'm hoping to work on some more shorts this year when I have the time. especially since I made this one a while ago now and see many things I could improve upon. Hopefully I've bring out something cool for you to look at sooner rather than later ;)
That was an awesome story, the love between a daughter and a father )
cool
A dramatic and still gentle story, effectively conveyed with no conversation between the characters. Excellent.