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Lazy Animation #4
Due to multiple delays (thanks to ESKOM) this video has arrived two weeks late… I’m sorry.
Voices & Animation by Fapio
Music by David Rose, Kevin Macleod, Old Lang Syne performed by the BBC Symphony.
“Crowd Noise” from FX Sounds, “Riot Angry Mob” from Audio Productions, “Dirt Shovel On Coffin” from Youtube sound library
So... that's why there are no Mickey Mouse cartoons nowadays? If that's the joke, I feel like it could've been better presented. If that's not it, then I'm not getting it. If it's not a joke... I can't really see the point! Animation and voicing is both good btw.
Well no more Mickey Mouse cartoons from me anyways and thanks man I actually thought that my voice over was rather subpar.
I did understand what you are attempting to go for. Court parody and such. The voice acting is actually rather decent. But I feel like the writing and the animation timing was quite lacking. Timing is a pain to work with, hell I myself struggle with timing as of the moment, but I feel like there where some areas that lasted much longer then it probably should have. Also the punchline was very lacking. Things where not explained very well ether. Was was Dopey stoned? Why was only the murder and the domestic abuse only shown proof of? The Hell was the floating ball? There wasn't really much debate in-terms of Mickey's case ether. It would have been funnier, if Mickey would have attempted to deny more and more evidence of his actions by making up funny stories why things where the way they where. Also the Intro zoom could have been handled a bit better. If you are going to have a foreground with the background and Zoom with it, make sure the different pieces Zoom differently with it. It might of been a case where you should have used something better then a VC if you could.
As for some good, well as stated before the voice acting was decent, and the coloring and the proportions where on spot. But I feel like it point of this parody failed to connect in terms or writing.
Bear in mind that this was bad on purpose (Trust me that’s not an excuse) but I notice that the presentation is extremely esoteric. So if anyone’s interested here’s all of my Mickey Mouse cartoons in their proper order.
Good Art but animation needs work. Should have added some head and body movement and like raising eyebrows to the judge to make his talking more interesting especially since he is who we see mostly in the animation.
I agree that the animation was very lazy especially compared to my older stuff.
Plot twist, it was Minnie. She threw on some makeup and a fake cast to play victim. She knew she would be called to the jury so she could have a final say in Mickey's sentencing.
I wasn't a fan of this animation though, it had so much more potential for jokes, and even play on words. The audio was very soft, and it was hard to understand what the judge was saying because there was too much garble. I also felt that the story was lacking a bit. Perhaps some flashbacks of steamboat willie. Perhaps more disney characters. Perhaps witnesses to the stand, and all of mickey's friends turn on him.
I don't get it.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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