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*Animated Vore, observe at your own enjoyment*
In this short animation we take a close look at the innards of a giantess.
i like this animation! it was kind of hot! and scary.
i love the way it was colored
Uh... Okay, first of all, good quality... The animation was fluid and graphic. The audio seemed to sync' up well, so no complaints there.
Then there's the 'content' situation. In your case, I'd say, "incomplete". First, it's short enough to be at fault for less than enough to really evaluate. Second, you didn't complete the journey to destination. You might be 'uncomfortable' with developing a qualifiable ending to this, but you probably should've thought about it before you started.
It comes to this simple principle : So we get swallowed by said giantess, and you advertised that we'd tour her bowels... Well and good (nasty maybe, but alright)... At least reach the so-called climax and conclusion so we get an artist's ideal of the visual journey. Why else would we even click on these things if we weren't ready for the journey?
I'd advise taking a little time away (from at least this project) and then coming back "ready to gun for bear" so to speak. You have plenty of talent, and a vision for what you want to do. Now, just get a clear view in your mind and actually do it.
Remember, Rome wasn't built in a day and neither will be your style... Breathe, take a little slack time, and then come back for more. You probably have something here, but YOU'RE the one who will have to explore it... build on it... develop the artist you were intended to be...
Mostly, try different things to find what "fits"... And as you grow as an artist, revisit this to see what you should do differently. We will be watching.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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