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The British Royal Marines must make a beach landing at Bluff Cove to take back Port Stanley.
(Clip from an animated short I created called "The Adventures of Captain Price 4" on my Youtube channel.)
Please, accept criticism and don't message me more than 15 times with your fan girl or whatever. The reason I said you don't put soul in to this, is cause you don't. If you did, you wouldn't be submitting content so fast all the time, actually it would take time for you to make something. I'd like to add that you should stop using same character models for a lot of characters, like in this cartoon where you copy pasted a lot of soldiers. What's sad is that your characters look all very similar even when not copy pasted. Also I compleetly agree with Mackle-Mouix. You tween everything, and that just doesn't look fresh. I don't hate tweens, but these are not even good ones. Your content is just lazy. Quick to make, lazy art style, and bad animation. But I'd suggest, for your next cartoon. Re-draw every frame that exists, paint your backgrounds, experiment with colours, make every character individual, and also add shadows to your characters. You need to impove your art and animation so much!
The song in the boat, you know the one to funny. nice work. To all the haters in the reviews your all fucken cunts.
These two below are hating idiots who have nothing better to do than bitch about pointless shit, at the end of the day you do what's needed to animate this wasn't that bad and you defo did not deserve them 2 zero's below, I do agree with them when they say the visuals wasn't the best but it was still more than watchable keep up the good work
I couldn't of explained this this any better than Mackle-Mouix, the comment below-
"The art style was really hard to look at, the animation is cheap, it looks like you just tweened your characters, you may fool people on youtube with you're 'tweening' but on newgrounds, we pick that shit up. Id suggest you stop pandering to the lowest common denominator as well, you may get 600k on youtube, but on newgrounds, id like to think we have higher standards. Also try to think of your own jokes."
thats probably the most honest feedback you can give towards this. - You probably have the potential to get better if you work on your drawings and animation. I suggest you stop trying to take shortcuts in the animation and actually re-draw frames and make new drawings instead of lazily re-using old ones. That alone would probably be a massive improvement on visuals.
The art style was really hard to look at, the animation is cheap, it looks like you just tweened your characters, you may fool people on youtube with you're 'tweening' but on newgrounds, we pick that shit up. Id suggest you stop pandering to the lowest common denominator as well, you may get 600k on youtube, but on newgrounds, id like to think we have higher standards. Also try to think of your own jokes.......we don't want harry partridge to be sad do we ?
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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