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A very short cartoon about health problems that may be obscure, but should be taken seriously, nonetheless.
I wanted to try something like Salad Fingers. Made with Adobe After Effects, and Illustrator.
It's one thing to take inspiration from someone else's videos that you like or respect but this is a blatant rip off David Firth's material.
This is an uninventive copy of Health Reminder, but the biggest problem is it's poorly written. Was it at least fun to make? I feel like if you focused and tried harder that you could make something worthwhile.
I love the trippy animation style and that everything morphs so heavily, nice work!
I enjoyed it, but it seems very close in concept and design to David Firth's "Health Reminder" series.
I definitely meant it to be "in the style of". It is very close.
I rather enjoyed the line "the ass weasels are manageable with diet."
I'm not personally a huge fan of the aesthetic, particularly the boiling hold on the background lines, but I thought most of the character movements looked okay. Try using the motion graph in After Effects to ease the tweens/keys a little more. Also, I noticed the head squirrels were showing a bit under his head as they appeared, you could probably fix that with a mask.
Overall I like it, I'd just recommend a little more fine-tuning.
This is the firs time I tried the boiling aesthetic. I'm not sure if it's for me, but it added to the unease for things. I used a mask for the squirrels, but it didn't go down far enough. When I noticed it, it sort of added to the chaos, but I could see going in and tweaking. I used ease's on the keyframes, but I do need to get more handy with the graph. They changed it up and it makes a bit more sense. All things for future projects. Thanks for the feedback.
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While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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