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Stephanie and her boyfriend talk a walk on a nice spring day. But things make a sour turn for the worse.
Let's not talk about the animation totally becoz people here have already blabbered upon that but, At the Rko moment it was nice and the lip sync of both the characters were Nicely done ..GOOD JOB. However There are some flaws which you should focuss upon and target them and improve yourself for future like , the character design was not very good ,you should have worked more on the character designed it ,They simply had no appeal. Voice acting was ok , i understand it's pretty hard to get a good voice actor .Improve your skills and before making a clip please plan out everything for your convenience like a professional That would really save time.Goodluck for future!!!!!!
thank you. i know it was rushed, but was just something to see how people would react. my cartoon Jealousy was way more planned out. story, characters, body language, animation etc. this was only something quick to make the viewer smile or laugh if they are into wrestling. some shorts aren't made to be taken too seriously. voice acting and audio is something I've been wanting to target for a while. i dont have the top animation software and im making the best of the software and hardware i have. reviewers dont seem to consider what program the animator is using. passion will make a person use whatever they have to continue forward. ive even animated on the nintendo 3ds for my cartoons Gifted and Accidentally Squirrelly. one day ill be able to own better software and hardware and a drastic improvement will be achieved. but until then, a few quick shorts will continue and more serious animations will continue.
thanks for the review/rating & thanks for watching.
The animation here is poor, and your animation style hasnt improved much over the past couple of years. You really need to work on making your animations cleaner and more fluid. Also, the script is childish and is very difficult to enjoy. Id definitely suggest you put in the time to really set up a story for your shorts. This is not only random, but I feel as though it wasn't thought through well enough. If you work on script and animation a little more, however, you could be on your way to bigger and better things as a developing animator.
Keep making rad movies.
My animation has improved tons since pervert Jones.. This was just a simple test. Nothing serious. Things like A Cry for Help which was all about the story didn't do well enough. The animation was good just slow fps. Jealousy better animation good story likeable characters. Still didn't do all that well.. So out came this to see what Ppl like. This is aimed at wrestling fans only. Jealousy is the strongest example of growth within my animation. And a different style of story telling. A cry for help could be the strongest example of story telling.
As an animator one must test the audience to see what's going to work. Ppl didn't fully understand a cry for help.. And questioned things and bashed it due to not understanding it.
Jealousy could have got a better rating due to it being more realistic relatable and being a cartoon in general..
I work to grow and to entertain.
Can't plz them all..
So much nope
Did you really feel the need to watermark your animation?
very needed. its quite common and it helps people learn who the creator is. if the video is shared all over the view can easily remember who the creator is by seeing the creators name through out the entire animation.
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