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In this weeks episode of IMO, i take episode one and its attack on nationalism, and decide, to hell with it all, lets attack every part of the spectrum. Satire, yo.
Well, it was charming.
- The animation needs a little work, feels primitive to today's standards.
+ The animation was colorful and was enough of a visual demonstration of your views and whatever you were talking about.
+ The animation was nostalgic, reminded me of the animations of old that were pretty basic and had used lots of tweening.
+ The writing felt natural and was indeed informative.
- It felt more like a lesson in the Horeshoe theory than an expression of your opinion, so that was a little misleading.
- The audio is clunky, get a better microphone or tweak the audio using Audacity (that program's free so get it, for the sake of making your movies better)
- There was a point in the movie where you recorded the audio with what seemed to be a storm going on, so try to record the audio in a soundproof place next time, if you can.
All in all, 2.8/5.
I enjoyed it, but it needs a helluva lot more work put into it-- increase the quality of these informative shorts so people'd like it better-- maybe end up on the frontpage someday.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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