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Here is my first attempt at filling in the missing gaps in my old series. Not necessarily recreated, more along the lines of re-imagined, but still trying to fit into what came before it and what will come after it. Hope you enjoy.
This is alright. I wish you would animate faster tho. You're using stick figures for corns sakes it couldn't be easier.
A fun action story! Keep it up!
Thanks. 2fps is a lot more restrictive than I remembered.
The visuals and audio are fine. The story itself is amusing. The only problem is that the movements are a bit stiff but that is not a major issue here. All in all, good job.
This movie seems to be a motion comic using extremely simple drawings in most cases.
You did show potential for drawing better since that space ship looked kinda neat.
I assume this comic is an episode of a serial and the story was surprisingly easy to follow despite missing information,
References to pervious events in past episodes are for audience members already following the story from the very beginning.
A recap of pervious episodes will farther assist with helping the audience understand your show with clearly.
I often try to communicate with clearly; However, sometimes my own use of words get lost in translation.
I can clear up misunderstandings by answering questions. Movies don't have the luxury of going back to answer questions asked by the audience.
A serial can answer questions in the next episode because it is possible to continue that story indefinitely.
I didn't completely understand your movie's story without the important information from pervious episodes.
Have the pervious episodes already been posted somewhere?
Seeing pervious episodes would have influenced my review.
I decided to review this movie as a single stand alone entity and hope to still provide useful feedback.
thanks. early eps are in my movies on NG.
hesitant to recap previous eps, it'd be almost as long as the new content.
ideally everything would be edited together to make one big movie. but I doubt that would ever end up on NG.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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