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Was watching some old tv ad's and came across a few silly commercials advising parent what not to do, inspired me to make this.
The concept is a lot better than the execution here, which is a shame because I think this could have been really funny.
I'd love to see a more over the top scene instead of a loop wherin the Child/Lollipop combo catches afire perhaps through the fault of a negligent/clumsy parent (I don't know what ads you were specifically referencing, but yeah.)
Additionally, the text seems to hold way too long before the link appears. I've lost interest before the final punchline shows up.
Anyway, even failing to have more shots/animation, I think some melodramatic music and/or Very Serious SFX would really add to this. It's a funny idea, and I'd really like to see another more developed crack at it!
Silly indeed, but I feel it would have taken like, an hour at the most, to make it.
Unless if it was a marshmallow instead of a lollipop. lol
Decent parody of infomercials, could've been a bit longer but a bit over 20 seconds is good enough, the resolution of the animation was very low, though, maybe try to fix it for your next animation.
Obvious advice is obvious. For what it is, this is good for a smirk or two though more interesting content would be better next time. At least the visuals and audio were decent. Okay job.
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