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John has a new girlfriend. Tommy thinks he doesn't know her...
This is aight but the voice acting and really subtle animations made the whole thing have very little impact
Thanks, for the feedback :) I'll keep that in mind for the future works!
Funny short you have here. There's one little problem though, the camera seems to be unfocused when there's a close up of their faces, that doesn't look very good on an animation.
But still, pretty soid movie nonetheless.
Thanks for the feedback! :)
Not bad. But not great either. Had feeling where the joke was going.
Damn it! I hope not everyone anticipates the joke! :)
I thought it was kinda funny, but I saw it coming a mile away, and then as soon as he say "She's a cougar" my fears were confirmed. You have the poteintal to do soo much as an animatior dont waste it on not coming up with good jokes. Also, whatever blurring effect you have going on, it isn't really working out, not with your art style.
Thanks man, yeah I feel like I've learned a lot from this one and I'm gonna work harder on the jokes and on the animation itself. This was one of those "had to get it out of my system" things :D
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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