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I do not own anything! The music belongs to steven universe "Dance of Swords"
I made this in my spare time, but please do not rate harshly im a new animator yet i would like to receive criticism, if you like the video rate and follow me. THX!
You got good ideas. Keeping making stuff till you're good at it.
Thank you, i will keep trying to improve myself!
That was pretty good for just starting out. Here is some criticism since you wanted it. I would recommend using sound effects and some more shadow details to your characters, so they don't look as flat. Also, nice choice of music. Steven Universe is amazing.
Thank you for the criticism i will consider these good ideas next time im at the drawing board.
By the way thx i love steven universe even if its a kids show , the music is amazing!
The animation was decent but could use some polishing. All in all, decent job.
I would say this is a good start for a new animator, but not upload-worthy. The music doesn't fit the theme, and artwork seems a bit rushed, and anything where a Kirby is sliced in half should make baby pandas cry. The animation itself was quite fluid. I would say work on making the artwork a bit more symmetrical, and changing the music to something a bit more "epic battle-y"
Thank you for you perspective on my animation. kirby being sliced in half was kinda funny to me because i would not think that would happend!
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