Tired of waiting?
Click here to disable ads!
You are not logged in. If you sign up for an account,
you can gain additional voting power over time, allowing your vote to have an even
greater impact on submission scores!
my first real hand drawn animation. The project was to take an inanimate object an bring it to life
Thanks for keeping things "Old School"! Animating from hand drawn is getting rare, and this being your first, I want to encourage more out of you.
At the same time, constructively... Even a terrible sound track is better / more entertaining than no sound track at all. It doesn't even have to have "great" or "standard" foley... (that's sound-FX) for those who don't know. I honestly think just a splash of even "cheesy" music, and a few sounds to "sell" the shot would spruce this up for your project to a top notch... at least for what it is.
Everything else, you hit at least the mark. These comments are just something to help out a bit, from my angle and view.
Good animation. It is expressive throughout. Good move when the plug turns away and chuckles mischievously. According to your projects design, you succeeded.
Its nice! Normally I would say OMGERBILZ BLAM DIS! but saying 'This is hand-drawn' really explains alot. I definately can't draw this well.
Short but super cute! A bit of music would have made it even more cute though =)
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.