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Dokuroshima 1 pt. 2

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Jan 25, 2015 | 10:29 AM EST

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This installment takes off there Episode 1 Part 1 took place. As the Imaginary Crew fially set their feet outside in their costumes, they've decided to pay a visit to a nearby club, next to which the unexpected happens...

Also featuring Maltos as the voice actor. And yes, this is the first time I had one in my project :D

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CyberdevilCyberdevil

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Interesting things starting to happen! The outline-rich style of animation's pretty neat, plenty of detail too. Music fits in, but seems to overpower the voices sometimes. So far, it's good!

-cd-


AoiShinigami responds:

I'm glad you've enjoyed it.
I guess I'll need to put a bit more effort into voice editing..
Thanks for the feedback :D


NecroionutwizNecroionutwiz

Rated 3 / 5 stars

sounds nice but you still have to work on them voice acting :) as for the animation was fairly good there's always room for improvements



barfconventionbarfconvention

Rated 2 / 5 stars

I'm actually most curious about the use of text in this. The characters are voiced, so I'm interested in why their dialogue is written, and why is it not always written under them (like anime subs)? There are also areas through out (like the file name), that make me curious about intent. I found it fairly distracting here, but thought it could possibly be used in an interesting way in the future.

The backgrounds were a little sloppy, and the 'sameness' of the shots made it seem a little bland.

I think more diverse shots would make the this style of cartoon (minimal animation) a lot more dynamic and engaging. My favorite part were in general the drawings of the Future King, he's really funny.


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AoiShinigami responds:

Well, TBH, I kinda got used to put written parts next to characters since before I used actual voice in the projects. I was thinking of abandoning that little part, considering that most of the text in this movie is actually written in the bottom like it should have IMO. Maybe It could possibly used in some interesting idea as you may have suggested.

I am aware of the backgrounds problem, and I'm working on it, so you may expect better backgrounds from me in the future. As for now, this is what you get :/

I'm glad you liked the "Future King" part :)


The-Damned-KingThe-Damned-King

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Neat animation, can't make out what the story is about though.


AoiShinigami responds:

I'm glad you liked the animation :D

I will make sure the storyline would be conveyed further in the future installments, as I think of this part (and the previous one) as more of a prologue.


metroidfannumber1metroidfannumber1

Rated 5 / 5 stars

why do people start shit with people so inexplicably?

also background fail.