I don't think this is really NG material.
I am sorry, but this is just another short crap animation video, and there are tons of them
piling up in here, with no idea, and low grade animations.
I would suggest for you and most people who start with animations or anything else,
to polish your skills at least to that level, when you can look at you work and say
"yeah, other people might like this and enjoy it".
Just my thoughts, but your music track "Full Neon Jacket" is good.