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It has been a while since I've submitted something! This was originally suppose to be a short and sweet Xmas toon, but with time and finals I just made it a winter themed one.
Much thanks to @Ockeroid for the music.
Hope you enjoy!
What a fun and friendly little short. :) Gets me all warm and fuzzy! Though I do wonder how he turned into a snowball in the first place... excessive waiting maybe? Nice work!
Hey, it was cute.
The style and colors are nice together and the concept is sweet, cliche but sweet nonetheless.
Keep practicing and creating.
This is really cute! The color choices are well made, and the backgrounds are nice.
I do think it's pretty generic on most fronts though.
I'd love to see some bolder cinematic choices. Consider how you want each shot to make the audience feel. Right now, nothing is really engaging me or making these characters/story feel specific or endearing.
But overall, it's a really sweet little cartoon! It's always nice to see sincere things like this, and I do look forward to seeing more!
Thank you thank you thank you for this review!
I've never even thought about the things you mentioned! Watching it again, there definitely could be some better shots and bolder cinematic choices!
Quite charming and sweet a nice short aniamtion to pick up a long and kind of dreary day, 5 stars.
I loved the story and the animation, however, some of it looked rushed.
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