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Ginosaji the Origins

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rated 1.69 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Comedy - Parody
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comedy
ginosaji
richardgale

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Uploaded
Jan 11, 2015 | 9:34 AM EST

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A short animation based on Richard Gale's film The Horribly slow murder with the extremely inefficient weapon. Believe it or not, i made this for a school project :D! Hope you enjoy! Also the origina l is better, in the upload something went wrong with the file and red is orange. Idk m8s

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ShaeGuyShaeGuy

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Even though this is just a school project, there are parts in the video where the white isn't filled in and you can see straight through the hands, face, eyes, etc. Just be careful with that next time. Good luck!


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GenesonSimmonsGenesonSimmons

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

On everyone else but the Ginosaji, I felt like the animation was... Disconcerting. Like, on the forensics scientist, he has a beer gut, but then a perfectly clear anime protaganist face on top of his shoulders.

I think the comedy of the original needed to be a little more in place here. Maybe have the victim walk, head drooped down, and with a total derp face, the Ginosaji hitting him... With a sppppppoon. Without the emphasis on that, the joke isn't quuuuuite as funny.

Since this is a school project, though, I can't rate it to the same extent I would on a regular work. In respect of that... I'd give this a B. While it does make attempts at humor, I think it's a little misplaced, and the animation looks a little shabby.
Note, I still liked it! The above is meant to be constructive criticism to help you with future projects. I just think the humor and the general flow of the animation need to be improved upon. For a silly school project, it's fun.

(Did I gloss over anything in my review, or judge something too harshly? I know that it took longer to make this than me typing, so be more critical of this than I was of the animation.)


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alektowr13 responds:

THANK YOU, SO MUCH. FINALLY CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM OH MY GOD!!! THANK YOUUUU!!!!!


boypiscesboypisces

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I don't understand this at all, but it has pushed me to want to find out. Fantastic.


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alektowr13 responds:

it is based on the youtube film The horribly slow murder with the extremely inefficient weapon by richard gale. Thank you so much :')