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This is my first Cartoon I've ever made ever so hopefulyl It's decent. This was done for my Digital Media class in school which is why there's no explicit humor or anything.
wow first animation, ace job, better animated than mine after about 3 months of doing them, Checked out your 3d one too, also brilliant in a different way.
I love it!
Yes it was indeed decent, better in fact
for this beeing your first animation i am impressed
fitting voices for the character surprisingly amusing for such a simple concept tho the actionscene is missing something at least a jump for the punch would be nice
it had a superb ending XD
id like to see more from you pherhaps even with more advanced graphics :)
That was... decent. It was awesome, in fact! It's well-animated, especially considering this is your first cartoon. It has an amusing storyline as well. I love how the whole thing escalates from a day running a lemonade stand to "competing" with rival stands as they all turn into mecha lemonade battlebots (best I could call them).
The combat scene between the duckbot and the bunnybot (sorry man, what did you call them?) was quite lacking in action, consisting only of angry stares and a single exchange of punches resulting in a nuclear explosion, which in itself deserves a few more frames of proper animation.
Overall, you've made a really funny animation. I've already watched it many times as I was typing this review. Polish your animation skills, and we'll be eager to hail you into the Newgrounds Art & Animation Force! (a spontaneous metaphor referring to all the artists on Newgrounds)
Originally there was going to be more action, but I had to cut it short for 2 reasons. One, I was on a deadline and didn't have nearly enough time to animate a whole battle. And two, I had to keep the video around 2 minutes long for my class. But thank you for the constructive criticism, much appreciated!
That was definitely unexpected. Its pretty funny though, and the animation is nice and cute, especially the kitties :D
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