MashPlanet is filled with small claymen that are being invaded by some kind of other clay Community I will read their world until there is no body left. Until one brave clay man and Robbie, stumbled upon something unique. A nukeon the other side of the room. The Clay community willuse the nuke to take out theThe clay invaders.
Get more people to voice act for you, it's annoying to hear a pre-pubescent kid doing 4 our more voices at the same time not to mention that it makes every character look and sound the same.
Work on your story a bit more also, it was confusing, unfunny and it didn't lead to anything.
I'm sorry about the same voice but this is all inspiration from knoxs korner, he used his same voice and never wrote a story, he just makes things up as he goes, which is what I do. Thanks for the motivation though.