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The Long Ass Walk

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rated 2.68 / 5 stars
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Adventure - Other
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story
interactive
twine

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Nov 12, 2014 | 8:00 PM EST

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The Long Ass Walk is a short interactive story about a young lad named Dennis Average McOrdinary, and his quest to bring back the Oceanspirit to save the world of Questeros!

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gam3freakgam3freak

Rated 3 / 5 stars

ive come to terms with my sexuality



theroyalgodtheroyalgod

Rated 3 / 5 stars

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QuillicitQuillicit

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Good start, definitely some hilarious moments (I'm pretty sure Pimp Mage's spell will keep me laughing the rest of the day). I agree with others that some expansion could turn this decent game into a really entertaining one. Keep developing!


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IndieRetroWolf responds:

I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you for the review!
These sort of comments really mean a lot to me, thanks again.


bobm59bobm59

Rated 3 / 5 stars

It's not bad. You're a clever writer and I really got a couple good laughs out of this game. Next time I would strongly recommend the paths diverge a bit more based on choices you make early - there are several circular loops where choices you make have little to no bearing on the ultimate outcome.

Nice job for a quick ten minute diversion.


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IndieRetroWolf responds:

Thank you for the review!


dackeriahdackeriah

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Ehh.... Okay I mean I get the plot, but I just feel like a bit more could have been added to it; it could have been a little bit dirtier; a lot more elements could have come into play with this game including: more options for continuing the game, more characters, options on whether to get rid of characters or not, labels to each character regarding what they end up being "relationship wise" to you throughout the game - I just feel like more elements could have been added to make the game hilariously perfect. It's lacking something; in theory it was hilarious, but it was that type of hilarious where you do the whole "huh" grunt and no actual laugh comes out. But yeah that's just my opinion...


IndieRetroWolf responds:

Maybe the problem was Oceanspirit Dennis is a lesser known mascot for an online community I'm a member of. There's some "in-jokes" in there.

At the start of the project i fantasized about a Mass Effect kind of party system. But time is limited for me now days what with work and kids.

Thanks for playing!