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Thanks to Sean Fitz-Gibbon for the music
Feels like the 'is it smiling' part kinda ruined the atmosphere a bit. Also, when someone runs past the window, we assume there really was someone out there, but in the end it seems there wasn't... or if there was, that it wasn't relevant at all. Maybe you could've used a noise to give him an excuse to turn? Feels like a loose end otherwise, but overall I love the idea! Creepy stuff.
Thank you the feedback. The shadow running past was someone running past (there's also something else that happens in the animation which show someone is in the place) and yeah it was mainly to throw off the viewer until the target could move, but I like the noise idea, or maybe something supernatural could have worked.
Agains thanks for the review.
That smile was more comical than creepy, kinda killed the vide for me at least.
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