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Coffee drinkers know this. When you drink coffee, you are going to pee soon. That is the law.
I've got to admit that for all it's faults I think that this is a lovely little charming animation. I really enjoyed it. There's a couple of technical things I think you need to work on, but keep making more and you will see improvements :)
Thank you! :) Hopefully in the future I'll be able fix those problems that I'm having now.
Its alright. Audio was alright, the mouth animation was good but the spacing between the people talking was boring and really pulled me out of it. The pee talking back was funny though.
Thank you for the feedback. I'll try to pay more attention on the voice spacing in the future :)
This was my first finished animation so there are bound to be some mistakes, but I'll try to fix them in the future.
This kind of criticism is exactly what I'm looking for and what I need to make my work better, so thank you.
but.....its soo delicious....i cant stop
That's the way it is. I'm drinking coffee right now :D
The animation is okay, although I really liked the quality of the audio and the sound of your voice. :)
Thank you! Your comment made my day :)
After being exiled, the mysterious "Valdoros" must contend with home invaders
Tape One of a pixel animated Horror anthology series.
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