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DAMIEN & DEZZ |EPISODE 1| CHICKEN GUN

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rated 3.02 / 5 stars
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Comedy - Original
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damienanddezz
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Sep 30, 2014 | 12:33 PM EDT

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Episode 1 - "Chicken Gun"
The six idiots are spedning time, relaxing at their beach house, when suddenly James is turned into a chicken!

Reviews


SummerOlivesSummerOlives

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

It has potential, however the short does contain a handful of small problems that effect the quality of this comedy.

Firstly, I think the animation is decent enough and the voice actors did a passable job along with the good audio quality. However, although this is the first episode of this possible mini-series, I think it would be beneficial if in Episode 2, the opening was a lot shorter namely that it takes up a good third of the episode and the credits takes up another. Dialogue, was also pretty forgettable for a comedy. That being said, I wish you the best of luck in future shorts and you do have potential to make something better.

Summarized:
+ Animation was decent.
+ Good Audio Quality.

+/- Voice Acting

- Opening/Ending was too long.
- The comedy lacks any noteworthy laughs.
- Ends alittle too soon, feels unfinished.


JComX responds:

Thanks for the feedback, yeah, for future episodes I'm definitely gonna leave out the huge theme song. :) and this whole thing is based on some shirt comics I made like 5 years ago, I hadn't got into the 'swing' of things quite yet. So I'll try to make sure future ones have more laughs and quotable things. :)


yoshimicksteryoshimickster

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Pretty good, but you should cut that opening a little bit.


JComX responds:

Hah hey thanks. Will do.


NovaWolf1NovaWolf1

Rated 3 / 5 stars

i give you 3 stars for creative image ideas for what could be a good comdie flick


JComX responds:

Thanks for the feedback. :) Hopefully they'll get better as time goes on.


charizardrojocharizardrojo

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

ok let's do this:
Pros:
>The voices are pretty well done, not static sounds, nor anything like that, sounds pretty professional.
>The animation it's pretty well done, fluid, vivid, heck it sincs with the audio very well.
>Colorful. the whole animation is very colorful and vivid too.
>Chicken Gun. This animation have it's sparks of originality. I can see these evolving into something pretty unique.
>The Intro. oh my it gives the whole thing a solid presentation, but...

Cons:
>The intro is very long, but I think it's ok for the first episode.
>The Background. even when it looks very good it doen't fit with the rest of the animation.

9/10 Keep with the good work guys.


JComX responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, I'm definitely not a backgrounds guy. I'll work on making them what the characters are doing more though, maybe make it seem like the characters are more "in" the scene. Oh, also yeah, the intro is long and I'm only planning on having it in certain episodes. Thanks :)