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Hey guys! I got great feedback on my last little test, now I know this is still short but I got very eager to get some new feedback! :)
(Don't mind the fact that they don't have any heads <-<)
So, please give some constructive critisim on how I can improve! I hope the audio isn't to bad, and that the animation is decent!
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Nice upgrade on the environment! I like how lots of effects are used constantly but subtley, and the columns and everything breaking and shaking added depth.
Not sure it's deserving of much criticism, it's a pretty perfect stick fight scene in the classical sense. I will say I've found that putting a blurred picture in the background (even just light-grey blocks) can help the foreground pop more than plain white, could be worth checking out.
Also, moving the screen and following the characters like a camera would compliment the action well, really bring it to life. Have you used a flash vcam? It's a square motion tween that acts as a virtual camera. Some animators don't like screen movement, I think it moves a story forward with at least some panning.
It's an intricate scene, be cool to see what more you can do.
animations were alright i suppose, but i can't help but feel ive seen that EXACT scene in another stick fighter flash
Hmmm, that is impossible because I have animated it all frame by frame!
It might be similar?? But a copy is impossible!
I like it man. You should make the structure callapse after the stations get taken out!!
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