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I have not animated in adobe flash for well over 2-3 years now, but I got bored and decided why not pick it up again and start making a few animations! :)
So this is what I made so far, constructive criticism is very welcomed! :D
Check out my Youtube channel: https://www.youtube.com/thaflump
You do have skill, i hope you bring out more!
Nice smooth frame-by-frame work, the fighting bit was good and I love the effects like the explosive launch-off. Reminds me of the old 'icantcolourin' movies with a Battlefield-esque attitude.
You may have taken a break from animating but the skills are obviously still strong, it'd make for a cool movie with some more time and a plot.
The environment could use more effort, white backdrops are fine for stick-figures usually, however I think you could take more advantage of your effects and prop-use if you had a more detailed surrounding to work out of.
Not gonna go over 2 stars since it's short and inconclusive, it's also very good animating and should be extrapolated into a larger movie.
Thanks a million for the feedback! :)
I'll definitely look into adding more of a background and environment!
Really means a lot to hear all this! :)
I knew signing up on NG was a good idea ^^
I can't believe you still remember that much on how movement goes considering how long it's been sinc the last time you animated xD I couldn't remember even the basics after a few months of being away. Good job!A longer version of this would make a great action animation!
Honestly, I don't remember anything my hand just did things xD
I will try to work on a longer version! :)
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