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Ray's day at school

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rated 2.11 / 5 stars
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Comedy - Original
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Uploaded
Sep 18, 2014 | 3:51 AM EDT

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A short animation I did about a student who goes to school and gets attacked by his teacher for not answering a question.

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chris-the-stick2chris-the-stick2

Rated 5 / 5 stars

good movie, and nice visuals, despite the teachers attack on the kid....
it had nice facial expessions, and good face/background drawings, a good film.
do more sir



SummerOlivesSummerOlives

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Personally, I did chuckle at how bad the singing was near the end. Another positive to note, is that the animation while not exactly good is not the ugliest I've seen, it just needs more effort put into it. Now then, the brief plot and joke of this short however was not funny nor clever in the slightest, and the dialogue felt like something a 4th grader would write up. The voice "acting" here is not good, the audio is pretty mediocre, especially considering every audio clip ends with an annoying "click" and has very bad background noise, I would highly recommend a better microphone. Despite the criticisms, I would like you to keep trying and improving within each outing as it does seem you might be more capable as time carries on.



PixelMan666PixelMan666

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

No words can describe the amounts of nostalgia that I'm feeling right now. I'm sorry but I think you could do much much better and also if this is a "video" that's fine but maybe re-working on this will help improve the quality I hope. No hard feelings but I do not like this video.