and then he woke up i laughed so hard

I commend you for your multiple efforts, despite the flaws you are really devoted into making many flashes and that only deserves applause. Now, as for this flash however despite the decent enough animation and good audio quality, I feel that this has been territory that has been hit for quite some time now and as generic branded as let's players are nowadays, videos toward how much lets players suck now a days are just as generic and unfortunately this is no exception. Soon enough though, criticizing the people that make the videos that criticize the horrendous let's players are also going to quickly become annoying and generic. That aside, it was okay but forgettable. Keep Trying!

Short and sweet, although you could add more humor to it. -Adolf