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Watch as these three friends get put into a boot camp program fora day by mistake.
This shouldnt be blammed. but its not GREAT. its decent. the animation could use a little work, so could the voice acting.
It got potential, the animation needs to be more vibrent, it's too stationary, for example grass that is softly waved by the wind, or some eye blinks. The voice track could always get some work. But what you really should is some sound effects and a background music, it feels unprofessional without them, remember to put not too much sound effects, and add a music related to the situation, for example in the boot camp you could've put a soundtrack of some military base or a music that reminds of military operations, it's hard to describe, but if you pull out the right music, it'd be a lot better.
Not really sure what to say here... The animation itself is excusable, however the video quality is poorly rendered but that's really not that big of a deal and did not effect my score that much. However, the opening theme, dialogue, jokes, voice acting, overall quality was just bad. Maybe this is your first attempt into venturing new territory with this (series?), but this comedy really lacked substance and contained nothing memorable throughout its writing. Next time try to put alittle more time and effort into the jokes and what exactly it is your trying to aim for in this confusing plot. That being said, its not the worse I've seen but there's some work that needs to be done if you want this to stand out better. Keep Trying!
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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