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The girl's name is Kokoro and she is the main character in a story i'm creating. She has the magical ability to her future in her dreams. Does this seem like a good vision to you?
It seems a bit lame, but it's the first work I've actually finished and published so I'm so happy! Hope you enjoy and check out my other sites.
You can also watch on Youtube: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QjPle1FRbro&list=UUDumZUuYwiOioSc1xaOzSXA
The artwork is alright. Just alright, but it'd nothing practice won't fix. Keep it up.
very nice I cant wait to see more. As for her vision no it doesn't seem good, but i'm not sure what she saw... did she lose a fight ? Dream of her death? Did someone else close to her die and that's why she cried? The only things missing in your story are what and why (what happened and why it happened) Review: great use of music, good art, and good animation.
Glad to see you've finished a project. One step at a time....
It feels like you've got a good amount of potential, and I'm curious to see how this will play out. Please don't keep me waiting for the next part.
Health Reminder 3: The Unfixable Thought Machine
This is oil story... The real trend of the world. How Tuk uses oil to solve his problems?
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