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Aug 23, 2014 | 5:30 AM EDT

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Yeay, my 2nd submission (don't watch the first, just don't). This one I made for my HSC, hopefully I get a band 6 or high band 5!
Made this animation solely on Flash without any add-ons. I'm still practising my drawing abilities and here's a link to how it's developed over the years:
postimg.org/image/706gpp6dd/full/

NOTES: I can't include violence (that's why the ending was cut out and anti-dramatic) because HSC guidelines forbid violence, nudity, explicit themes etc.)

Reviews


Kirb-StarKirb-Star

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Wow, pretty well done! Specially the 3D! Tough, my only note is that the characters' expresions look... kind of weird.
Otherwise, good job.
Pd: Reminded me of Digimon :P



Rojay101Rojay101

Rated 5 / 5 stars

excellent



ShadeNightwoodShadeNightwood

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

It was a good animation overall though it could use some better 3D animations and the voice overs should be a little louder but over all I hope that it doesn't get blamed it was still enjoyable to watch it even reminded me of some old flash movies I used to watch.


Whaku responds:

Voices I had to make do what with I had; a music player to record hehe. As for 3D, quality decreased there because I had to make this task on my DET laptop which prevents me from installing any 3D programs or anything =/ (I also suck at backgrounds, I'm working on it)


FractalRavenFractalRaven

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

I really enjoyed this one. especially the retro look and the music. sadly, I do have some minor nits to pick here...things that prevented me from giving this a higher rating. the voicework seemed rather tacked on and needed more fleshing out. I wonder about the use of fonts and the signage as well. feels kind of cheap and crude. the length seemed rushed as well - perhaps more content to give the story a bit more substance? detailing the fight, giving the hero a longer set up for both the computer scene or equipping for the fight? excellent work otherwise. I'm looking forward to more of your work.


Whaku responds:

I can't detail the fight because my assignment can't have any violence, nudity, explicit themes etc. I wanted to do a proper battle buut nope. And yes, I probably should have paid more attention to the hero. As for signage... (the current signage was actually just a draft which I used to test codes but I got lazy replacing them, my bad). The font is overused, yep.